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The next night.
What is the value of patience?
An immediate reaction
should be the result
of the unconscious,
and if I am to trust that instinct,
patience seems to work against
those true judgments.
Yet that patience is so much
a part of me that I am unable
to account for why it exists,
if it is indeed an opposing force.
Instead I would consider the two
to be working in accordance to a single goal,
true judgment and wisdom. Certainly
there have been moments when
I have stopped myself from acting
in response to something following
an unknown force that would guide me.
What is the value of patience?
An immediate reaction
should be the result
of the unconscious,
and if I am to trust that instinct,
patience seems to work against
those true judgments.
Yet that patience is so much
a part of me that I am unable
to account for why it exists,
if it is indeed an opposing force.
Instead I would consider the two
to be working in accordance to a single goal,
true judgment and wisdom. Certainly
there have been moments when
I have stopped myself from acting
in response to something following
an unknown force that would guide me.
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Overall Vision Originality Technique ImpactI will start off by saying the title very correctly works with the literature you have written.
I of course have always been a sucker for poetry and the poetic mind. I respect the patience writing takes.
That being said, you have used wonderful imagery and I very much like the way the words flow together completely without having to rhyme. I have always thought that a very huge part of being a poet is knowing how to make words mingle on the tongue and in the brain without having to rhyme.
You have succeeded in that action, dear.
I very much enjoy this poem, and I am looking forward to future things from you, and checking out the rest of your gallery.
Continue to write, it's a wonderful therapy. [For me anyways.<img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/h/h…" width="15" height="13" alt="
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